1.- Not talking like a God, just telling you what I think you should change in my opinion
and if they are your first works, then the most you need is constructive critisism! I didn't say "your pic is crap", I told you what I thought would be improved.
2.- The pic looks like it has a lot of bloom! If it's not blur, nor bloom, then what is it?
And what impresses me the most is that, when pearcy said "it hurts my eyes" you answered calm and kind, when what he said was crap, he gave no arguments, no comments, nothing. But I, telling you something logic, get hit by a chair?!