As I already stated my opinion on youtube - I stay with my opinion. This video was pretty average and kind a weak comparing with your best works. Nothing really fresh and exciting to watch. Of course, there are few things which were quite good and I liked it, but not the rest. But let me get straight and explain why I am not so satisfied as I see the majority is, may I?
I think I can start with good aspects of this video.
Good aspects:
*good camerawork as usual;
*vintage style colors and no high saturation colors which make video look like a rainbow;
*pretty well included white scratch effect;
*no unnecessary effects which distract (I know the intention to make it look groovy and hollywood looking).
Bad aspects:
*A lot of speed up clips which are really unnecessary and used too much that it even distract, annoy and don't make any good effect;
*Black clips. Those can be used when those clips separate different action or if the same action - from a different angle or distance. I didn't see any of these stated cases in your video, so those black clips are unnecessary;
*Stupid unnecessary meme face was used which, personally, destroyed all the impression.
