If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
That red was the only colour for me
It goes faster and it's no trick of the eye
And would not matter if it where only dye

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
There is no other colour i'd rather be
Red is the one and the only one
It's red that gives me the most fun

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
No other colour feels so free
It's red that really does it for me
I might even invite it over for tea

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
Blue is ok and I dont really like Green
But i'm quite partial to the colour red
I even think of it in bed

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
I just like red

I could interpret a worrying obsession with blood into that. Also, I do prefer green over red. Still like the rythm.

mkay
written yourselfe?

What happened to Blue 2?

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I could interpret a worrying obsession with blood into that. Also, I do prefer green over red. Still like the rythm.

maybe time for womens period lol.

Yes I wrote it myself, and it's nothing to do with blood. I write the ocassional poem and wrote this one today after meeting a red head last night and thought it was a fun thing to post even without the back story. It just struck me as a very fun poem, and so I thought - sod it, i'll post it into the most testosterone charged place I know and see how it goes down...

If you're interested in my poetry at all I have a web site thingy, PM for me it if you want it to save public embarassment from admitting you like poetry.

If I could think in a colour it would be blue
If I could chose another then I would have said Blue 2.

I'm not afraid of public humiliation, could you PM me the link?

Hey, stop laughing!

Eric
Eric can't be seen
Is he invisible?
We can see where he has been
He leaves behind a watermark
And shiny new things to see
But where can he be?
Is he lost in the dark?

Eric can't be heard
Is he mute?
We can guess he's a nerd
But what do we really know?
Your guess is like mine
His work seems quite fine
Tho' there's not much to show

Eric can't be smelt
Is he odurless?
But we get a wiff and a hint
Of the stuff he is working on
We know he's good
Working from behind his hood
But has he gone?

Does Eric exist?
I know he does
I have seen his picture
And the words he has written
I've seen what he's drawn
But he's not on my lawn
Or in my kitchen

I can't find him anywhere
But he must be about
He can't be nowhere
Everyone has their place
Perhaps Eric's is outer space
Can we visit him there?


Not exactly a fine work of literature I admit, but what the hell

Lol good

Genius! Pure genius!

Haha So true

That needs setting to music

This definately needs setting to music.

hah somebody call Schuppor :P

Trying to reach englightment?





When that is said, your good with words

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If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
That red was the only colour for me
It goes faster and it's no trick of the eye
And would not matter if it where only dye

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
There is no other colour i'd rather be
Red is the one and the only one
It's red that gives me the most fun

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
No other colour feels so free
It's red that really does it for me
I might even invite it over for tea

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
Blue is ok and I dont really like Green
But i'm quite partial to the colour red
I even think of it in bed

If I could think in a colour it would be red
If I could chose another then I would have said
I just like red

Fail.

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Fail.

Eh?

Quote from The Very End :

Trying to reach englightment?

No I just like to express myself, poetry is one meens to do that. I'd recommend it to anyone willing to try it, it's a marvellous form of self expression.

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Fail.

I wrote an Aisling once, and it wasnt English hating, and it was in English, so yes you could say I failed on that one. Then again it said something that meant something to me, and allowed me to express how I felt over the troubles, so in that sense it was a sucess. Whether Red is a good poem or not isn't for us to decide. I wrote it over a red head, tonight i'll read it to her... The outcome of that will be what decides whether it's a good poem

Becky, Oh yes lurvly poems....now get back to coding an uber server

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Becky oh Becky
Eat my shoe

Yes well failure at poems I know

Quote from Becky Rose :

No I just like to express myself, poetry is one meens to do that. I'd recommend it to anyone willing to try it, it's a marvellous form of self expression.


I wrote an Aisling once, and it wasnt English hating, and it was in English, so yes you could say I failed on that one. Then again it said something that meant something to me, and allowed me to express how I felt over the troubles, so in that sense it was a sucess. Whether Red is a good poem or not isn't for us to decide. I wrote it over a red head, tonight i'll read it to her... The outcome of that will be what decides whether it's a good poem

It was meant as a joke, but I meant the nice part tho
I have tried, and I enjoy writing a little text here and there, but they allways sucks, and they allways ends up beeing emo-shit-end-of-the-world stuff.

Wish I was actually tallented on something else than beeing drunk

Mooore please.

Copy & Paste?

? Anything pointing to us others, or meaning that Becky copy-pasted her writings?

Quote from AlienT. :

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Becky oh Becky
Eat my shoe

How about:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
You just wrote Red
What about Blue 2?

Quote :

Mooore please.

Wasn't he an astronomer?

http://beckyrose.com (site is a work in progress)

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Copy & Paste?

Nope

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
All of my base,
Are belong to you.