here is my first video of lfs i know it isnt that bood build but tell me wat i should fix so i can make p2 better i would love to hear ur oponions idc if there bad i wanna learn

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m1HsduD50Ng

I'm not going to bash on your first video, we all have to start somewhere so have a link for future use

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I'm not going to bash on your first video, we all have to start somewhere so have a link for future use

sirr i want ur oponions tho so i can improve

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sirr i want ur oponions tho so i can improve

Everythings wrong

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could u plss explain so i can improve?

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could u plss explain so i can improve?

you were already provided with a link that will cover everything you would ever need to know about making movies on LFS.
here it is again in cae you missed it: http://www.lfsforum.net/showthread.php?t=53389

that was a good first try...a few things to try to fix is the stuff visible in the video, like the gauges, and the tire temperature, and chat still visible in the video.

also, you switched views during the clips, that is a big no. try to get the view pre determined for the clip, and keep the movements fluid.

when you switched off clips, you used some crappy transition effects, you should stick to the more neat, and better looking ones...my favorite is fade to black and then fades to the next clip.

Epic username.

Nice video about explaining how to mod your cars?

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Epic username.

I literally started laughing.