Do it not fastly and be patient... Wins that guy, who is patient on his work and not rush things up, so result is successful.. it's not a race.. u are not racing with anyone...
Now about video, definitely there is at leat a bit progress... The idea is fifty-fifty.. could be expressed better, BUT at least avoided a lot of mistakes.. of course, in this video there is still plenty of mistakes, but less than in previous works... The monitor streaming a racing shot shows your progress at controling video editing software, but still need to keep on learning how to control it properly...
Keep it up. Good luck.