Well done. Good movie. But I have three problems with the movie:
1. You forgot any anti-aliasing effects. The lines are pretty jagged which reduces the quality alot.
2. You ended up doing a "BF1 crash/skid movie" in 50% of the movie. That is not what people expect from an F1 car and looks very arcady. Also you like filming the BF1 while jumping over curbs that would in real life merely crush the suspension and leave the car wrecked. Try restraining from such things unless you want the people to get the impression the film is about an arcade-game like Flat-Out.
3. When you show AI drivers in the race, give them proper skins so the people don't notice it right away. Also try to not pull away from the AI at a much higher speed. That doesn't look like close racing and goes into the NFS-"I'm so much more uber than you"-corner.
But the camera-work was well done, you worked together with the music nicely. The intro was also very good. Keep up the good work!
Vain
