Quote from tristancliffe :

Hmmmm, that sounds rubbish. Don't bother with poorly written anecdotes - if you can't write properly they won't come across well. By all means 'set the scene', but don't rely on 6 year old 'humour' to do it. Leave out the bit about disease or life as we know it, don't use burning and burnout in the same paragraph, check spelling more frequently. It sounds like you want to work in a field, rather than the field of automobiles, which are rather different.

And owning your own shop, customising and fixing cars, will require some form of schooling and education if you are going to do it well (although experience is just as important, don't get me wrong).

I know it's not a job application, but you just sound like an idiot writing like that, and it comes across that working on cars should be the last thing you attempt.

The teacher said it had to be an anecdote..But yes I want to eventully own a shop, after many years of working for shops, and under people. I do relize it requires schooling, in the body ill explain cars mean enough to me to make me go to school..Anything i missed?

And its my first choice not simply something ill settle to do, I LOVE CARS!

Last edited by greg_slideways, Thu, 15 May 2008 20:44.

Ok, I have to write an essay atleast 2 pages about what my job is gonna be, I want to be a mechanic and so far this is what I have, any suggestions please to add. This is a true story, my uncle had a V8 impala, and that made me trully know about cars being my life!

The intro has to be an anecdote, that means pulls in the reader, thats why I choose to tell a sort of story.



At the age of three, smelling burning rubber of a freshly made burnout, a young child is turn into a “car nut”. Many call it a disease, but others call it “life as we know it”. This child, hearing the low thunderous roar of a v8 engine, had now known what his life had meant. He knew cars were his future. A mechanic, he works on cars and sometimes makes them faster. This sounds like the perfect job for this child.

So, this boy is interested in a field with automobiles. He thinks he has the skills, but to his dismay, a trip to a vocational school and a certification is his best bet at getting the job. He is not interested in furthering his school career. He has ambitions of owning his own shop, customizing and fixing cars.

Dalek..I think it rocks!

Seems To work Fine now..

Add me to the Storm Racing Side of the Map!

But now it seems to be the same green lines from Local to compter on internet...Still drops out!

Ok, So I am fine on the internet, I have fine connection but on LFS I lose connection and get kicked off server constantly. I do not lag I only disappaer from the server?? I have found this but I am not sure how to fix it?

I want to get into this But I havnt signed up yet is it too late?

Lol I know!

I'll Be glad to Hold this server as the Official Practice Server!

greg_slideways
evilpimp

We are both on, feel free to join us!

Ok, I am on the combo now, Single player Practicing! I am Going to open up, (Touge-M Server), With this combo If anyone would like to practice!

Any Server info, You said that Last night you would Send it Via Pm, I didnt get a Pm?

Yea Im sure Drift is a thing of the past!

Hope I can get in on this one...3pm and a great time for me! Practise Singleplayer Is What Im doing!!!

========= About You =========
First Name:Greg(ory)
Last Name:Thilesen
Country:USA
RacerName:Akina
UserName:greg_slideways
Age:17

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LFS Track:Oval

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16 Kyoto 250
Training for racing
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Droping Drifting for awhile Going to Focous On racing For awhile!

I am allowed to jump in for last two races?

Quote from lizardfolk :

it is a fun configuration. Seriously, it may be difficult and unique to the oval culture, but it is a interesting and fun outlook on the discipline, especially in a pack

After all, Calder Park was used and that oval was right handed as well.

You have enough people that say its fine, I wouldnt worry about it anymore.

I personally Say keep it! Great fun turning Right for once! On an oval!

I love it..Although I hate that Mr.Keisu Didnt add my part to vid ......But Layout Is Great!

I like it alot Fun to drift!

Hey, It looks like i am going to have to stepback and drop out of this..I am putting drifting on the backbunner to get my racing skills to par!

Quote from PMD9409 :

9/ Phillip Diaz / CoRe.PMD / CoRe Racing

My shot just went out the window!

I searched Inferno, Didnt do it good enuff? But thank you either way!

Love it..Great way to illistrate LFS great Crash Physics!

Thank you Man..Im dumb in the head?