5/10 (good for first)
10/10 -2 for drifting, -2 for the music and -1 for quality

constructive critisism

I was going for the sarcastic remark, but instead I'll just list what was wrong:
No synchronisation with music
Bad fps
No mpr message block
Angles with no use (straight)
Keyboard steering makes my brain bleed
Forgetting to pause recording
Video content holds no value (no spectacular moves, not synced with anything)